Saturday, October 19, 2013

Something Fishy

We watched this movie and used it as motivation for our writing. 

Something Fishy from J.J. on Vimeo.
We loved the movie especially the sock fish and the pants shark.

Quietly I was sitting on the sand drinking coconut juice. Suddenly I spotted a leaf glowing beside the waterfall. I picked up the key that was under the leaf and unlocked the door and went inside the hide out. Yipee this is mine. Slowly I opened the door and I found glowing rollerblades. I tried out the rollerblades and zoomed around. Captain Hook chased me to steal my rollerblades. I saw the leaf on Captain Hook's hook. I had to give Captain Hook my rollerblades to get the leaf and then I went back to the sand.

Author Justice

Mysteriously when I was on the monkey bars I kept following the monkey bars. Suddenly the monkey bars turned into branches and I ended up in a jungle. I saw two monkeys having a fight over a banana. It was really dark because there was lots of bushes and trees and they were covering the sun. I saw lots of snakes and other dangerous animals. Suddenly I heard something's a cheetah. I ran and ran as fast as I could. the cheetah wanted to gobble me up. Slobber was coming down the side of his lips. The cheetah's teeth were sharp as a crabs claw. I ran and ran and magically I was on the monkey bars again.

Author Livy

I was sitting on the toilet trying to read. I was doing a poo. Suddenly tinkle tinkle. I went down the toilet. I said to myself I wonder where I am? I know I'm in the pipe. I wonder where I am going to? Oww gross I'm in the sewer a long way from home. I hate rats. I'm with rats in the sewer. Go away rat! I said. Patiently I waited and waited. Suddenly Rats thousands of rats arrived. I teleported. Phew I'm safe and sound.

Author Louie

Mysteriously I was walking down the street...suddenly I fell down into the drain down the pipe and into the sewer water. There is all of the poos and wees dead mice and rats. It is gross and yucky. It stinks down there. It was dark and cold because there was no light in there. Suddenly I saw 24 big beady eyes in the water coming up out of the yellow water. It was starting to get creepier and creepier as I was walking in the sewer river. Just then I said "What could it be then...BOO. A big black green blue and yellow monster came out of the glowing water. Then he chased me back through the pipes but I was sprinting sprinting sprinting as fast as I could. He was about to get me but I ran away.

Author Mya

At school on the computer I was playing Angry Birds and talked to me. It said "Come in". I thought yes or no but I didn't get a choice it already sucked me in with its slingshot. "Ahhh" I screamed "Let me go". After that I got shot to whack a pig down. Bang I whacked a rock instead of a pig. After that I had scars on my face. Suddenly I saw an ice slide. I got my red angry bird friend to come and do it with me. We smashed some ice to make a skateboard. We zoomed down the ramp doing flips. Next the big bad pig came. It chased me out. I shouted "Bye friend". I ran to the school computer. Finally I am safe but somebody was following me. It was my friend.

Author Henrietta

In Room 5 we use pictures and movies from the Literacy Shed to inspire our writing. Click on the link to watch a movie for inspiration. Happy writing :)